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Voices in her ear

She wished to no longer be alone,
but she never wanted this.  
They came to her as she despaired
promising her the way to bliss.

Voices only she can hear

They speak of her darkest dreams
goading her to embrace her anger.
They can see who she really is
and how close she is to surrender

Voices that she so wisely fear

She refuses to become a monster,
yet she knows that she cannot win.
One day she will eventually surrender
for her heart is already black with sin.

Voices that only laughs and sneer

There is only one thing she can do
before she will cause others pain.
With the voices laughing in her ears,
this little girl goes to sleep, never to wake again.

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This poem is a bit special, I wrote it for a drawing I did. And before anyone asks, no I am not good at drawing, but sometimes I just draw something for fun. ^^

Also I finally understood how to make the text stay in Italics after submitting, yay! :dance:

Anyway, hope you people like the poem! I promise, someday I will write something cheerful for once, I am just not very good at those... ^^;

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*Retrubutionist777 Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow this is wonderful! Very interesting story, and the rhyming is perfectly done. It's smooth and adds so much depth to the poem.

And yeah, I'm not very good at writing happy poetry either. For some reason it's easier for me to write sad or serious things.
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Mood: Affection *Vilhelm-Johansson Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you! :hug:

Yeah, it is pretty weird actually. I am normally a pretty cheerful person, but I never write cheerful poems... :hmm:
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