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How clever I am,
so very cunning I can be!
Yet endlessly stupid,
I thought they would not see.
The mask I created,
has been torn away.
All my lies exposed,
nothing more I can say.

Too late to say sorry,
it is too late to explain,
for I have deceived them,
no more trust remains.

"It is the easiest way",
"They will never know".
truly I am a fool,
what was I afraid to show?
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This is a poem I wrote a few days ago. I do not think I need to describe what it is about, it is pretty obvious. :)

And for once it is a poem that is not about me! However it could very well be. I have told more then my share of lies during my lifetime, and if these would be exposed then I fear that the poem would very well reflect what situation I would find myself in...

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~Kuriakyuuketsuki Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Please forgive me if these next few lines of praise for your poem don't make any sense to you [still mostly asleep].

For one, I love how precise the words you choose are. It's very well written. And since I've been working on a play dealing with Shakespeare's work when I read this I read it as Hamlet spoke his "To be or not to be " monologue. xDD
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*Vilhelm-Johansson Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! Do not worry, I understand you just fine. :)
I suppose it is a very good thing when my works starts making you think about Shakespeare! :D
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~Kuriakyuuketsuki Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Woohoo!! You're welcome ^-^

I love Shakespeare..~
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